Wednesday, 13 May 2015

100 word challenge

What a horrible day. It all start when I was going for a stroll on a slimy tree stump then suddenly on the corner of my eye I see a shadow. As I turned around two MASIVE claws grabbed my head and started to fly off. As my eyes glanced up I realised that it was a bird. We started to land on the tree branch," I guess this isn't to bad", I said to myself. It wasn't to bad until they got a pot out. My heart beat raised until they asked me " would you like some soup" no I said.

1 comment:

  1. Laurie (Team 100WC)17 May 2015 at 14:13

    What a great twist at the end of this 100 word challenge, Amelia! I definitely wasn't expecting an offer of soup! I really like that you've used some speech to help bring all the characters to life! Keep up the excellent work!

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